Saturday, September 10, 2016

Traditional Rhetorical Analysis: Hilary Clinton's op-ed on Deseret News




As the presidential election nears, every candidate is trying to sell themselves in these last crucial days. Recently, Hilary Clinton, a prominent presidential candidate, wrote an op-ed titled “What I have in common with Utah leaders” for Deseret News.  In my opinion, I think her op-ed piece is quite persuasive to her readers. To thoroughly analyze it, I will be using Kenneth Burke’s Dramatism to examine her op-ed.
In Clinton’s op-ed piece, she is trying to win over Utah’s vote since it is a Republican state and she is a Democrat. However, the agency that she uses to achieve her purpose is quite intriguing. She mentions both distinguished Latter-Day Saint members or leaders and history of the Mormon church. In fact, Hilary mostly puts a spotlight on these people by quoting what they said. For an example, “Listen to Mitt Romney, who said Trump “fired before aiming” when decided a blanket religious ban was a solution to the threat of terrorism.” Romney is a distinguished member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Saints, and he was the Republican candidate for the presidential election back in 2012. Since he is so well-known and respected, Clinton cited him because the LDS members will listen to him, even if they do not listen to her. Other than Romney, she quotes Senator Larry Pressler who became a LDS member a year ago and gave a lecture series at Brigham Young University. In his statement, he said that “Trump’s plan reminded him of the Missouri Governor who singled out Mormons in his extermination order of 1838.” Additionally, she mentions significant Latter-Day Saint church leaders like Sister Rosemary Wixom, Joseph Smith, Brigham Young, Gordon Hinckley, and Thomas Monson. Even though she doesn’t reference it directly, Hilary Clinton utilizes the values of The Family: A Proclamation to the World issued by the church. For instance, she says phrases like “keep kids and parents together” and “every child can reach his or her God-given potential.” She is definitely trying her best to appeal to the Mormon community in Utah.
If the scene was different, would Hilary still say the things she did in her op-ed on Deseret News? The answer would be no. If the scene switched to the Democratic National Convention, her talk will be completely changed and she would employ a different kind of agency. Overall, her op-ed piece was quite persuasive to the Mormon readers because of the rhetorical techniques that she applied.


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2 comments:

  1. I did my post on the Donald Trump article and I was surprised that the articles were so different from each other. I feel they both got there points across to the people. It is great how different these articles are. Both focused on two different types of people as Trump focused on middle class citizens and Clinton on people involved with the LDS faith.

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  2. Besides all the legal disputes and lies that surround her persona, Hillary Clinton's main issue in connecting with the American people is her blatant pandering. This is a perfect example of how far she takes her efforts to appeal to her audiences. She abuses the stereotypes and generalizations applied to regions and peoples.

    In one of her radio interviews, Clinton went as far as to claim that she always carries hot sauce in her purse in a desperate and ridiculous attempt to win over the respect of black population in New york. ( http://dailycaller.com/2016/04/18/hillary-clinton-tells-black-radio-host-she-carries-hot-sauce-in-her-purse/ )

    To me, her attempts to pander to a Mormon audience fall as flat as her supposed adoration of hot sauce.

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